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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 1, 2009 2:26:39 GMT -5
Name: Milo De Kalub [ Mi-low-Deh-Kay-lub ]
Nickname: Spots [ Striker calls him that ], Tribal Boy, Little Hawk Feather [ Tribal Group calls him that ], Mama's Boy [ Bullies from around town ]
Age: 11 Years
Gender: Male
Species: Lion
Affiliation: Neutral -> Hero
Description: click to view
Status: He pretty much just travels around with his buddy Striker when he's not being punished for that, other times, he's scouting for the Nameless Tribe.
Location: The Tribe's location is actually a hidden secret, but tis said they live in a beautiful place surrounded by thick forests, a crystal sparkling water fall, beautiful trees off pink and purple tented leaves and blossoms. It's almost as if it's Spring all day every day there. But he hardly spends any time there. [ Nameless Zone ]
Abilities: He has a strong arm when it comes to throwing a ball, and his tribe having to fend for themselves he is trained to sneak attack. Eh... You'll hear more about that in personality. He has a few Indian moves to help him out in tough situations, he just never paid enough attention to completely learn them all or fully.
Boy can he run, if this kid is paying attention he is like a mouse running from the flaming hair dryer of doom, he has to be when his dad catches him hanging around town.
The Indian Ability moves will be listed in POW Moves.
He happens to have great aim was well, Just doesn't always seem to know his own strength, like breaking windows throwing a ball a few properties away, then making a run for it.
Girls wanting to use him as a dress up or make up doll makes him POOF disappear!
Weakness: He could not swim to hope he was a Tribal Member. This kid sinks like a rock, and usually panics which only causes more trouble and for him to blow off his energy so he drowns faster.
He also has a huge fear of heights. He just has to not look down or could pass out and fall. While everyone else is running off a bridge for their lives, Milo will be crawling in the center whimpering while the train dashes closer.
He asks alot of questions which tend to annoy older folks and get him into trouble.
He has a fear/nervous reaction of needles, hospitals, or such things to do with medical service. Bandages are ok, but nothing more or he will high tail it out of there and leave nothing more than a dust cloud form of himself.
He has a tendency to space off or day dream constantly, even at the worst of times. In the middle of a ball game though, he once caught a foot ball that just landed into his spaced out hands, where he panicked completely confused and hurled it at another team player in the Nameless Crystal Fields. He has also snapped out of spacing when everyone on his team called his name, he simply stepped forward with a hand out and caught the base ball, causing the other team to have 3 outs and win the game.
As far as games and fighting go, he has on and off days. He'll do really good one game or fight, and most of the time horribly the next. Always in games, sometimes in fights.
He tends to not always be able to back himself up, like bumping into a big bully and merely blinking at the guy towering over him who seemed rather 'upset' by this.
POW Move:
Claw of the Bear - Adding PP+LP, the user may swipe 3 times with very large claws able to slice better than a brand new very good scapal. [ = youch ]
Ram - Milo takes out an old ball that seems to be sown together with coconut skins on the outside and murmurs an Indian Ritual to make it grow in a boulder size to knock out the opponents like bowling pins, or split them to trip them while he and anyone traveling with him make a get away. Can be used once a thread.
HootHoot Doll - Using a faceless plush that looks like any old sown together rag doll, he must obtain a lock of hair or a quill from his opponent sink it into the doll's heart. This activates him being able to inflict pain on them with many needles or whatever beating actions he displays on the doll. May only be used once a thread, user can not use any pow moves after this for five turns and they also become faint for those turns after wards.
Nameless Tribal Ability Charm - All this basically does is turn the suer into a mini Chao sized form of themselves with the wings as well, but no change besides not being able to use pow moves, he usually has to come up with attacks on his own like this, but basically uses this to lay low or hide. If caught in some sort of containment in this form, he can not retract from the form until he is freed, then eight turns after that. May be used as much as wanted due to so many set backs, but it will not be used every five turns or so on, it takes awhile to turn back so. LP+MP Since he'll be harder to hit in this size. Click To View Image
-[glow=red,2,300]I'll create more later as my RP with him goes on[/glow]-
Chaos Ability:
Character Stats:
PP: 8 LP: 10 MP: 3
Personality: He has a friendly personality, but he does not always trust everyone. Mainly because, last time he did he was nearly beaten to a pulp. He is jumpy due to his father yelling at him asking where he had been, which doesn't help because Milo is not always the best liar. He tends to babble whenever he is in a tight fix, such as being cornered for info of some sort. There's alot more power his Tribe have that several others know of, which is why they stay hidden. Milo of course, disobeys that and goes out to explore.
Milo did not have entirely the awesomest little kid hood, but it was entirely horrible either, and the last thing he'd want anyone to know is his past of that. There are scars, well hidden, but not completely all over Milo from different things you'll come across in his history.
Now for the sneak attack bit I promised, his only problem is that he doesn't pay attention or tends to space off. One time his father told him to take his night out and stay away the whole night awake guarding just outside of the village by himself. There were a few robbers who were ready to torch the new upcoming location. Milo on the other hand was starting to drift off, wake up, drift off, wake up, etc. So to try and keep himself awake, he threw up a hacky sack and bounced it from knee, to side ankle, to shoulder, to foot, to head, and so on. It didn't end so well for Milo after his father had to take care of the gang himself.
History: Milo had been born of a Cougar mother and Lion father, him being the leader or as others know, Chief of the Nameless Tribe. Chief Long Fang wanted his son to be the best chief there ever was after he passed away, so he constantly wanted him trained. Poor Milo watched the other kids play all day and laugh. Once he decided to go out and play some kick ball with them, and found himself on the ground from being struck to the face so hard. Holding his deeply cut cheek and looking up at his father who had crossed arms and a stone hatchet in his right hand, staring down disapprovingly at his son.
After his Night Out, or Silent Vigil the tribe calls it, he was in even more trouble. He had been goofing off and forgot to pay attention as usual. His father had to take out the several intruders coming to destroy the village himself. Milo was simply mortified at the sight of no life left in the robbers, his father had been so violent, he didn't want to take his place if he was going to be like that EVER. The night of that, Milo had been whipped until he couldn't feel his back, then thrown into one of the underground cellars and locked in as punishment. His mother felt horrid of the notion, but his father said he had to be treated like he was for disobeying orders of the chief.
He does not take much interest in the medicines are fight teachings the elders have to offer, what he'd rather do is go out in fields and chase dragon Flies, catching one is supposed to mean better crops for your family that year. There had been severeal occassions where He'd look out into the trees and see someone there, but he couldn't tell who. One time he actually bumped into the Wolf. Not sure who he was, Milo asked a name. The man replied "Zeta, Lord Zeta." Milo just blinked and took a step back, watching the striped canine's ragged scarf twitch from the slight breeze. Asking what he was doing here, Zeta merely stared at the young lion. "Looking for someone who could be of some use to me, but you do not seem it." And before Milo could have a say in that response, Zeta had disappeared from sight.
After that small bit of excitement, Milo started wondering off from the Nameless Tribal Grounds more and more to go out and explore the world. Keeping himself well hidden of course so not to be caught. He didn't understand currency or the bad people out there, so he stole from time to time. But when he stole, it was mainly medicines. He'd rush back to the Nameless Tribe and bring it to the Shaw where his very sick mother ly. But no matter what he brought, he couldn't find the right thing to bring her. He was to old now for him to retake any medicine teachings, only once can you have the time to learn it. He knew very little from his day dreaming and goofing off to where he couldn't find the right kind for his mother's illness. Others had said she was hit by an arrow, shot from a striped wolf. More and more pain and stress began to fill Milo, which led to anger, which led to attacking others for medicines to get what he needed. It was his fault, all his fault, his mother was so ill. Once when he went to steal cough medicine to ease his mother's wheezing, he was caught and attacked back a few people running the side store. But the anger and picture of a red liquid oozing from her weak lips led him to jolt passed the first punching and snap it up so that a loud yelp signified a broken arm. Within a few moments, the three men were on the ground in pain with a few broken bones and Milo made it out with a terrible limp. Trying his hardest to keep back tears from what he had turned into. Wishing he had never goofed off, that he was a good son, that he could take it all back. Wishing that he had warned the Tribe about this Zeta person. Why did he attack his mother anyways? What could she possibly have done to him?
His mother was coming closer and closer to the arms of the Silent Angel. [ Grim Reaper ] And this time, when he brought medicine he was followed by some so called heroes. They did not seem very happy with him robbing drug stores or side road marts and thought the village was some sort of bad army, so they attacked. Milo can't really remember much hwo they were, he was to busy trying to protect his mother. After the fight though, the Tribal Members could only glare down at Milo, which that day he was nearly banished. That night, he was whipped again until he fell unconcious for the pain, but he ws getting used to these painful punishments, for there were others than that. Like being tied down and having your body stuck with so many needles you look like a living pin cushion. Each covered with some sort of burning herb. Sure, it helps in the future when you're to close to fire but the pain is alot less than it should be, but tis more painful than to be burned alive with the needles.
Wondering everywhere now, wherever he can go, he's still looking for the right thing for the medicines and answers of this Zeta person. He's all alone and no one ever seems to understand him. He's covered in scars for the beatings he's recieved all over, including the whip lashes on his back that are not very hard to find.
Anything Else?: If anyone else would like to make more Nameless Tribal Members feel free, if you have any theme song suggestions that would be nice too.
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Post by JC303 on Sept 2, 2009 12:37:04 GMT -5
Hoodoo doll seems too demented. Couldn't you make it a lock of hair that you put on it or something? Otherwise, that's just fine.
Strike Out; the pow move doesn't match to the name; it sounds more like a POW move for Striker. Kunsen Kunai would be copying Jill's ability because of the bow, and I'm not sure about the Yuraka Tribal Ability Charm.
Have attacks like;
Claw of the Bear - adding PP and LP, Milo will claw his opponent. A bear has five claws, so the attack will hit five times.
Think about the Native American culture. They believed that everything had a spirit, so powers would relate to the spirit. They also relate to animals like bears and eagles and such. (I would know, I lived in New Mexico where the Indian culture was well-known)
I also don't want to make Striker and Milo buddies immediately. I want Striker to meet Milo one day, and they can become buddies. He could be stealing from the market and Striker runs into him when he's being chased by townsfolk. Its just that....its almost like this character was made for the purpose of being Striker's "buddy." That's kind of supposed to be "Buddy the Chao's" Job, no offense.
I like the location, but erase the bit about hanging out with Striker. Say that the kid wanders around a lot.
Don't have abilities having to do with throwing balls. That's supposed to be Striker's specialty.
Weaknesses; The fear of height is good; keep that. Say that Milo's afraid of water, but I'm sure an Indian can swim pretty well. If he's afraid of needles though, how can he have the Hoodoo POW move? That involves needles.
The rest, you need to put the "spacing out" details and else in the personality.
Sorry for the long comment. Just want to help. I like the way you drew him ^__^
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Post by AnT on Sept 2, 2009 12:49:18 GMT -5
Claw of Bear- Yeah, a bear may have five claws, but how can he hit five times? It's like you're saying each claw can bend, and its the claw that swipes, not just the paw.
As for the location, I can't decide if he should be on Mobius or the Nameless Zone.
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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 2, 2009 12:50:17 GMT -5
There fixed it for you
And uh, others use balls too. I've gone to Tribal games with my friend Taylor, only they used a weird sown up ball. They mainly use it as if it were a soccer ball though, only no net and there's alot less players. Or if they're bored or alone, they dow hatever they want with it, throw it, catch it, toss it, kick it, ect.
Fear of needles, he's not the one bein stuck with the needle so he wouldn't care. Just because others swim well in the Tribe doesn't mean Milo does.
For instance, my parents can swim, I sink like a rock or barely move when paddling. Heh, except that one time there was a bull shark, I was out of there quicker than one could say Holy crap look a shark.
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Post by JC303 on Sept 2, 2009 12:58:44 GMT -5
-To AnT- You've got a point. PP and LP combination are enough after all...and if Striker and Milo are to become friends, then this Native Amercan Tribe should be considered a Native Nameless tribe. (In other words Ani, put Milo in the Nameless Zone)
Hey, that was catchy...
-To Ani- I do know that if people are afraid of needles, they wouldn't want to touch one...at all. You could say that he's nervous around needles...but it's your character, Ani. You can do want you want. With the swimming thing, I could agree with your reasoning.
And in history, not only did Milo get punished for not following the rules, but for abandoning the tribe in a time of need. I like the history, it's good ^__^
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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 2, 2009 13:45:43 GMT -5
Thanks, tryin, never did have any luck with making bios
Poor Milo just gets a bad rap
Milo: "The Great Screaming Eagle does not find me very lucky."
Uh yeah.. That
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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 2, 2009 14:12:16 GMT -5
Finishedness
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Post by JC303 on Sept 2, 2009 14:19:15 GMT -5
Like AnT said, why don't you take out the bit about the Claw of the Bear hitting 5 times?
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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 2, 2009 14:25:35 GMT -5
? AnT?
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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 2, 2009 14:26:15 GMT -5
Oh wow I need to pay better attention, I did not see his reply. I just realised only allowed to hit 3 times
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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 2, 2009 14:28:09 GMT -5
Fixed
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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 2, 2009 14:51:10 GMT -5
Just needs Nine's and AnT's approval
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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 3, 2009 13:18:33 GMT -5
Modified stuff out of boredom, still done
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Post by AnT on Sept 3, 2009 19:49:55 GMT -5
approval
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Post by ♥|Wolfy|♥ on Sept 4, 2009 0:08:06 GMT -5
Thanks AnT
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Post by Ninetalesuk on Sept 10, 2009 18:12:07 GMT -5
Approved
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